Critiques and comments are greatly appreciated. Another Update!:
So this really awesome brony was kind enough to animate and voice this for me, and it's TOTALLY badass! Check it out here. [link]Update:
Featured on EqD! Thank you all so much for your wonderful comments, I never expected to get this much attention on this comic.
Finally... Finally finished. *slams head against desk repeatedly* My eyes right now.... Aaahhh.....
Fun Fact: Bonbon is the French word for candy.
Just a little joke addressing why Bon Bon has a totally different voice every single time she speaks
Poor Lyra. At least it wasn't poisoned. Hope you enjoyed this.
So. Backgrounds, as we all know are not my strong point. I played a little bit with colors to set a mood, but only in two panels. I didn't think an fancy background was necessary for the others. All of this was done in Paint Tool Sai, except for the cutiemarks. Copy-pasting is a pain in the flank in Sai, and it is less so in Gimp, sp I make the cutiemarks in Gimp. This is why they are fuzzy and crappy.... and for that I am sorry. I'm just so tired of working on this. T^T
I was originally going to have BonBon muttering "Isn't Derpy cute when she flies upside-down?" in the last panel, but I couldn't get the text to look right. SO, for anypony who is wondering what they are looking at off screen, it's Derpy flying around.
I had a lot of fun with facial expressions for Lyra, and overall I'm fairly pleased with this goofy comic.
Let me know what you think, and I do hope I made some of you laugh.
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