Critiques and Comments are greatly appreciated.

Part Two: [link]

This is eight pages..... EIGHT PAGES OF PAPER! Part one of my battle for with ~The-Talking-Absol

I'm cranky today, and I'm so tired I can't even think, but that's not what I'm here to tell you about.

BEHOLD! AS THE QUALITY OF MY WORK DECLINES SO DOES THE PLOT OF THIS COMIC! WHAT PLOT YOU SAY? GOOD QUESTION! I CAN'T ANSWER THAT!

So,... This was intended to be more epic, but a.) there is life outside of the internet (ORLY?) b.) I'm lazy, and c.) writing the script took up most of my time.

This is continued from my Entry Comic to the QD Tourney, in case you're wondering why we meet so suddenly.

EXPLAINATION OF THE FIFTH PANEL! So I bet you're wondering WTF is up with Zack's face in panel 5, right? Well firstly, dear T.A drew that, and I didn't have the heart to erase it. XD And due to lack of time A.K.A I'M LAZY AND IRRESPONSABLE I didn't edit it out or ink it. For a full explaination of that face watch this video all the way through, [link] and then read this, [link] You'll never look at Care Bears the same way again, huh?

For those of you kind enough to critique my work:
I know the anatomy is bad, and the work's quality declines, and I know that overall this piece is a disaster, BUT! How's my shading in the panels leading up to the battle? In the panel where we first see Janis, Lilly, Luthra and Dante all together (shaded very darkly at the top) what effect does that particular style of shading have? Is it interesting, or should I try something else? How's the paneling? Does it flow easily, and can you tell where you're supposed to go next? Do you like the different shapes? Speech bubbles, ignoring the fact that the text is obviously rushed, are they well placed? Most importantly if you happent o know of any good tutorials for planning, designing and drawing compic please please please give me the link! Any advice you have is greatly appreciated!

Pokemon (c) Nintendo/ Game Freak/ Satoshi Tajiri
Meiura (me) (c) ~SailorSun546
Zack (c) ~The-Talking-Absol